They've finally stopped, my torrent of tears
Since seeing you my daughter, after all these years
Years that without you held only gloom
Now for sadness, in my heart there's no room
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gREAT Piece of work.... thanx for sharin...loved it loved it and more i give it beyond 10 koni
There's a bond between fathers and daughters that is so special. You make the reader fully aware of this and of the depth of your loss. We always hear about abandoned mothers with children, but we hardly ever hear the other side of the story - some very heartbroken fathers out there, too. Thanks for this piece from another perspective. Well done! Linda Midnight :)
Such an enormously reassuring poem of gratefulness, thanks and acceptance. arya.