Sunday, October 4, 2009

After All Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is the end
together we walk away
time finally giving us the answer
to a question so many times asked
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* Sunprincess * 18 December 2015

...........the simile at the end is incredible ★

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Quin Faas 06 October 2009

a sad poem....that's what love is after

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 October 2009

a lovely and sad poem...i too wonder..how such true memories sweet one's turn into painful one's....very well written...brings the total story to mind

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Krystal Vincent 05 October 2009

i no this feeling very well..this is a poem beautifully written. it spoke to my heart. even tho it was a reminder of some hurtful things in my past..but also good things at that. to be honest im still tryin to mend the wounds..that i no will never fully mend..because i truely loved a guy with all my heart but he hurt me bad..beyond repair even.but i say keep writing n striving

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