Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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My dear heart I know that you would
Lend me a shoulder if only you could

When I am low and times are tough
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Tia Maria
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The Dreamer 21 June 2009

How could one not care for someone so pure and true that’s what friends are for and that’s what will do – no matter how far they may be you would always find a shoulder from a person like me ;)

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Gert Strydom 19 June 2009

Love expressed very specially.

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Your beautiful emotions stand out in this poem Tia and your empathy with the other person. It is short but lovely. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

Short and lovely poem.

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Sue Sie 17 June 2009

A warm feeling to this very emotive poem...well written 10++ Sue

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Duh Huh 17 June 2009

Love at its finest expressed with real heartfelt emotion. Well done my friend, God bless. Thank you for sharing. :)

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