Sunday, August 12, 2018

After A Storm...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blowing over thick-headed mountain peaks
Throwing their make-ups in to bits 'n pieces
Swaying the hard wood emerald wigs
Like in a parading platoon, in green outfits
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 August 2018

Jayatissa, such a brilliant poem..10+++

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Thank you Bernard for the comment and vote

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

Mountain peaks are really very amazing. When wind blows and storm hits their peaks mountains remain in courage and face the obstacles. Mum squirrel sadly watches her washed away nest and gets sadness. With hope again she starts rebuilding her nest. An interesting poem on nature about joy and grief is excellently penned...10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 13 August 2018

Thanks very much Kumar, for your comment and vote.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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