Friday, June 10, 2011

After A Great Thunder There Is A Beautiful Rainbow Comments

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</>Once I was sitting alone, , wondering the beauty of nature
It was raining, and the thunder was breaking up the mountains
I was frightened, , i lost my mind, I scared of my coming future
I lost the way to my home.. I ran away under the rains
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Patricia Grantham 09 November 2013

You are very attentive to nature and its many dangers and wonders. However faith plays a very important part in the way you live and survive. The weather seemed ominous in your eyes but your fate was in Gods hand. Another great write. Well done.

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Kanav Justa 11 December 2012

that shows positive attitude, , , , nice write, , ,

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Jessie Hopkins 05 February 2012

Amen! That's all I can say. Along with keep it up! :)

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Liliana Roman 08 November 2011

it has a nice flow and rythm.

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Murphy Payne 29 July 2011

This is a great poem. The imagetry is very good. Wish I had written it.

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Ingibo Benson 28 July 2011

Truth and experience in beautiful language.

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

another great poem and i think u should never stop writing

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Aqeb Benazir 11 July 2011

A great story you conveyed through your poem! ! this probably wins the trophy among other poems which you wrote! keep it up!

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Ross Holt 10 July 2011

good poem loved the title! please read mine: D thanks

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