Tuesday, October 20, 2015

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Alone I stand surrounded by desolation
Under a pale blue sky
Filled with an intense, piercing sun
Brown crunchy vegetation fills my sight
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Billy Loving
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Shakil Ahmed 20 October 2015

last lines are very well-composed, i enjoyed reading the poem, thansks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your kind comments,

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