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I hope that day is not soon for this is the first poem of yours I have read and look forward to many more. Poetry changes my mind on men. Hearts are as deep as ours, just they need a pen to confess it. Nice Nice poem

The incomplete poem shall be completed, when firm hands shake the dust off my dreams. A seed shall crack open. There one flower shall bloom on the earth, where my ashes wait. Blissful roots of a pregnant sky reach earth to bind the loose sand. great lines!

You have painted your poetic soul into this beautiful piece. True poets give themselves away in words. May your work live beyond the calendar, dear Nikunj. Warm regards, Sandra

Very adept use of metaphors here. A pleasure to read.

dear nikunj......first, lovely poem.poetsand painters i feel have a edge over others because of their sensitivity and emotions which comes stronger than othersthey leave behind little somethings of themselves in form of poetry, literature or paintings, which is remembered.getting to know you more from your poems.they are exquisite without blemish. god bless you.....ritty

this one was awesome, i loved ur use of metaphores and imagery. awesome poem

very good poem i like it

I love it! So imaginative!

Excellent poem, far above the bland use of words so common on this site. H

Fantastic the last lines are superb just loved it.

Brilliant work Nikunj. Such profound thoughts with sublime images for us to feast on. The last stanza just perfection personified. 10 love Karin

a poetic vision.beautiful.voted10 surya

There one flower shall bloom on the earth, where my ashes wait. Blissful roots of a pregnant sky reach earth to bind the loose sand. lioved these lines!

'There one flower shall bloom on the earth, where my ashes wait. Blissful roots of a pregnant sky reach earth to bind the loose sand' Well said, Beautiful poem. Experianced is spoken here Enjoyed reading it Thanks

i Niks I read your poem 'After' and was blown away... A ten absolutely! So enriching in every line...perfectly glorious... superlative... no words to describe how you write. I read Beyond, even before you suggested I do so. Marvellous. You are an exceptionally gifted writer with a lightness of heart that engages continuously. Well done. Regards Monica

i like it very kool =) lol

See..i told you. D way u feel & see things can't be measured.

Well written poem from the experienced pen, nice fantasy...., like it 10.

The incomplete poem shall be completed, when firm hands shake the dust off my dreams. A seed shall crack open. ..................this says it all, and I love these lines.

Words simply can not do it for your poem is beyond comments and remarks...yet my humble opinion 'excellent sky high'