Tuesday, September 5, 2017

After 2010: A Mourning In Delmas Comments

Rating: 4.8

Delmas 42;
Near the dump down the road
Or is it ‘dumps' since it is
Split by a road?
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Lea Beima Dorestin
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 23 October 2017

This is a very mourning poem, describing Delmas 42. I know exactly where you're talking about. You could have written the same thing about our once affluent places in Port-au-Prince: Turgeau, Canape Vert, Bois Verna, Paco, etc. Beautiful names which mean nothing these days. The realities of these places are appalling. Thank you for expressing the sad and mourning realities of Delmas 42. I encourage you not to stop using the words to embellish our thoughts.

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 23 October 2017

Yes still beautiful places at heart. I wanted to express my grandmother's death also. It's a poem for both the country and myself. Thank you and I won't stop.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Lea B. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 04 October 2017

Of course I'd love to and thank you

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 04 October 2017

Thank you and I'd love to read it

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Sandra Erickson 06 September 2017

When friends ask what I am writing, these days, I tell them: elegies. Alas. Dreadfully wonderful, this ability to wrap shrouds. Well done.

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 09 February 2018

Thank you very much

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 September 2017

After six years, Reuniting again To send another one off. After five years of agony The job was completely done; Such a bittersweet moment. suffering and death portrayed well with originality in thoughts and words.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 06 September 2017

thank you for your well-appreciated comment

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