After Comments

A cleverly crafted work here Ernestine, with a good rhyming structure. Andrew x

After reading this, I feel a little bit more en-lightened, awesome, enjoyable read, the ends pulls it together, excellent Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X

This is a well structured piece with a timeless theme and easy pace. It reads like the lyrics of a song. Perhaps a hymn. Lovely poem. Allie xxxxxxxxxx

Sweet, sobering, and elouent, indeed....A cornucopia of emotions, all depicted with fact, and refine expression... FjR

Compact and very finely rendered. xx jim

This is by far one of the most touching poems I've ever read...I am saving this one. It's comforting and calming and ever so truthful............marci. :)

Beautifully crafted, your words are thoughtful, intelligent and insightful. Love the way this flows. Warmest wishes, Justine.