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beautiful poem i give 9.8

it is a very good poem. i liked reading it. i like the line 'there are a few who could unwind and walk the garden with sweet smile.' it shows the beauty of a peaceful garden

Short and beautiful poem for the few who can walk in the garden (of life) , enjoy the beauties and have a peaceful end there.A poem for dreamers.Thanks. I give a 9++ Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

moving on takes time..until then they could fade away and then walk again in the garden with sweet smile..life is a cycle..you can begin from bottom then up again and start from there and down again.....i can begin reading from bottom of your poem and up down...awesome write.