Sunday, September 14, 2008

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... there are few
who could unwind
and walk
the garden
...
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Manonton Dalan
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Irene 03 November 2021

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Hana K 11 October 2008

beautiful poem i give 9.8

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Aiswarya. T.anish 27 September 2008

it is a very good poem. i liked reading it. i like the line 'there are a few who could unwind and walk the garden with sweet smile.' it shows the beauty of a peaceful garden

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Short and beautiful poem for the few who can walk in the garden (of life) , enjoy the beauties and have a peaceful end there.A poem for dreamers.Thanks. I give a 9++ Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Edna Javelosa 26 September 2008

moving on takes time..until then they could fade away and then walk again in the garden with sweet smile..life is a cycle..you can begin from bottom then up again and start from there and down again.....i can begin reading from bottom of your poem and up down...awesome write.

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