Sunday, February 4, 2018

African Strong Woman Comments

Rating: 3.3

The love in her heart that keeps the world so warm
The pain in that hand in which she holds her child
The eyes that she looks through, it's oh so mild
She's a woman of no other form,
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Oloyede Fareedah
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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 14 February 2018

This is a good piece. Very well said with no ambiguity of words. Thanks for sharing

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Frank Adie 04 February 2018

Fareedah, I think poetry comes to you naturally. This piece is a mesmerizer. It clearly depicts the struggle of a typical African woman and it is quite loaded with poetic devices. Please write more.

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Reedah Pearl 04 February 2018

Thanks alot for taking your time to go through it and thanks for the comment, made my day.@Abhimanyu Kumar.s

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 04 February 2018

Beautifully depicted nature of her character. Good

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