Saturday, February 9, 2008

African Brother Comments

Rating: 3.1

Who was the villain
When it all began
Some fair-haired stranger
From a faraway land
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James B. Earley
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AB Faniki 15 September 2019

Greed has always have a hand in some of the worst crime commiditted by mankind. Thanks 4 sharin

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Terry Dawson 14 April 2018

Human nature is the villain. Great poem, James!

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Shirley Hanley 03 January 2010

Who indeed... for we are all brothers/sisters under the skin... are we not?

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Breanna Givens 01 April 2009

reading this poem made me think, it was very delightful.... keep writing

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 30 March 2009

After reading, one can only come to the conclusion that nothing has changed. Man is a 'sale' waiting to happen, easily swayed, at whatever price, no end in sight... We sell ourslves into the bargain. Good write....Cindy

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Bernard Ceasar 17 September 2008

Thanks for the comment on my poem-I really like this piece-African Brother-it reminds me of a poem that I wrote called Have We Overcome-it talks about how we african-americans place blame on others when really we are our own/biggest enemy(ies) .

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A touchy composition. Nice.

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Bob Blackwell 06 September 2008

But that does not justify, as they are both wrong.

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Michael Shepherd 30 August 2008

It's a small spiritual consolation - but - anyone who sells his brother or sister into slavery has already sold his own soul into slavery - and worse than slavery, shame and degradation...

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Asia Joseph 19 August 2008

also goong back to what dude said, yes it is present in the bible and what color do think joseph and his brother were? i wish this site had a discussion board

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Asia Joseph 19 August 2008

Very nice, felt the emo, thank you for sharing pls comment

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Tess Rockenstire 16 August 2008

Slavery began even before christ. Read the biblical history...even the Iraelites were enslaves by nebuchanezzar...by the babylonians and etc. It's poignant to say that there's truth to being sold by your own brothers. Again history has it...Joseph was sold by his own brothers the son of Jacob in the biblical time...there's betrayal in every man even his own flesh. No matter what your color is. Well done James......Tess

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Dawn Rodgers 03 August 2008

wow you really touched the heart of the matter and spoke the truth. I love this poem even though it is very sad.

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Lance Taylor 31 July 2008

This poem should make us All think. It is human nature to be villainous but until one knows this is when we can light up the darkness.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 07 July 2008

Mr. Earley, Great poem...an eye opener for some, a reality for others, enslaved by poverty, fear, drugs, illiteracy, etc.10 from me. Dorothy

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 07 July 2008

Mr. Earley, Great poem...an eye opener for some, a reality for others, enslaved by poverty, fear, drugs, illiteracy, etc.10 from me. Dorothy

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Dawn Slanker 06 July 2008

Wonderful poem...very provocative and emotional. Who was the villain? All parties involved were the villains. This touched my soul.

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Celise Mclean 03 July 2008

Deep Deep! your going back into history and almost demanding answers, i like this poem.

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Rani Turton 20 June 2008

History is rarely objective unfortunately. What is truly sad in the history of slavery I think is that the best, strongest, best nourished and often the heads or the sons of heads of tribes were taken...this 'decapitating' the tribes and villages. But thanks for bringing up this theme.

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Melvina Germain 26 April 2008

Hmmm, did our african brothers really sell their own people, who wrote the book on that anyway, I doubt it was written by black brothers. Excellent poem of course as it would be written by you James. I'll have to ponder on this one awhile and do more research. I have a difficult time believing that african leaders would want to sell their own people to fair haired men but of course it would certainly make fair haired men feel better to think so. Ah I've said enough. Melvina

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