Friday, September 14, 2007

Africa Rise! Comments

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Africa your kindness and loyalty should cover us,
Our enemies are alive and healthy,
We are bent and bowed down through the will of our sadness,
They have made us walk bowed in sadness,
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Phinda Mkhonta
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Bob Blackwell 23 September 2007

There is lots of passion in your poem, and what you right is true and it is time Africa became proud. I'm afraid we have to do things for ourselves, we set the direction and have the will to follow through. I love your country but also cry for it, as life is so unfair to most. Excellent poem. Once again keep writing put your anger to good use. Bob

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 15 September 2007

inspirational, i love the passion in this. nice job!

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