Tuesday, February 21, 2012

(africa Poems) Nostalgia Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon my darling!
We meet under the moon
So you kiss me here
And the crazy moon winks
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Pheko Motaung
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Valsa George 23 May 2015

Once when your loved one leaves you, you feel lonely and desolate! The feelings of a lovelorn soul is beautifully illustrated!

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 02 July 2012

I was left confounded, softly aghast at whether to rate the poem a 10 or to just wait a while and let the solemn effect sink betwixt my psyche, through my hands... One of the poems I've read and realize the full-bodied impact...; -(

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 10 March 2012

Nice....nice....very nice poem. I luv it....the african'ness of it. Its so simple n yet so song'y. Gud poem...keep it up...10

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Kevin Patrick 06 March 2012

There is great imagery here, it feels like a fairytale awakening. I love the innocents very enchanting peace. Simply wonderful

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Rajendran Muthiah 23 February 2012

Enchanting environs of Coleridge's Christabel is seen in the African night. Wonderful!

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