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You love us. That is why you prayed to our mother on our behalf. She heard the prayer and i know my mother, she shall shower you with love.

I like this very much! ! !

A good poem, I read pain but gradually hope comes, at the end we have the proof that good is to reveal itself.. Thank you for share

I agree with Luis. the first stanza is great and the overall poem has a nice flow with a positive sense and subtle meaning.

good write. you choose your words well. may i invite you to read my new poem called, spirits of the dead.