Africa My Beginning And Africa My Ending <Fusion> Comments

Thank you friend I'm honoured

amazing piece..outstanding! ! !

Great poem, i relate it to mine titled I am A child of the black soil.... this is amazing, thanks for sharing...

Hello Mr Luo Zhihai

Hello! My poetic friend! !

Hello! Nt poetic friend!

a powerful, passionate poem from your very heart and from the very heart of humanity's birth land.. we all, even if not African by birth, as human beings share ''African genes'' and we too should ''take action before Africa is buried again by the world's greed''! Thanks for sharing, dear Ernest Blessings

It is a magnificent piece of poetry...it is political yet historical...it is personal yet informal...it is solid yet flexible...it is the story of africa...it is about Africa My Beginning And Afraica My Ending. Excellent my friend...i like it very much.

A proud and well told perspective of the continent

Our beautiful soil in Africa! Nice work.

Dear Ewa, I find this a very beautiful poem, filled with great passion and strong emotions for your country and continent, Africa, and looking back at the past history on subjugation and colonization. I took time to read it and realize how important that your punctuation marks are in order. Punctuation marks are great help to make reading easier for readers. You may possibly look through again and observe the necessary punctuation marks. You may need to be sure how you form the structure of your lines in every verse. Otherwise, I find this as a very powerful poem from a heart of a poet. Thanks for asking for my comment.