From the mouth of asmara
To the ears of praia
I see a soul
From the desert of tunis
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Amazing poem, well structured the Message is intense keep writing.
I see a soul, Africa has a soul. Impressive patriotic poem.
Wow Im speechless. This is so amazing. The flow of your words, the style of your poem and the message on it are just great.
thank you friends for your comments. honestly, I have only read few of your works they prove far greater compared to mine.... you are making me.
A poem of sweeping scope. Great Africa indeed: the very cradle of the human race (some 200,000 years ago or more) !
This is such a beautiful poem. The imagery is wonderful. Bien!
Your patriotic cries, for your beloved Africa, echo through the miles and land upon my heart, here, on Long Island, New York, USA....you chart a map of the skin of Africa with a purposeful pen, and the picture comes to life! Well done, excellent write. PEACE
thanks Anzelyne, makhakul, moto....for your inspiring comments. they are making me. we shall get there some day...