Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Africa. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Africa, my motherland.
The home of my forefathers,
Who were as ignorant as children.
But were as industrious as wild beavers.
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Solomon Bright Dankwa
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 August 2009

I guess the rain down in Africa.The pulling factor is the ' red soil ', the smell of Africa!

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thank you

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Shirley Woods 01 August 2009

Hi Solomon, I think this is beautifully expressed and shows your kinship and spirit and how you hold your home with such pride.

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Obinna Eruchie 19 July 2009

Wonderful insight on Africa.

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Becca Ryan 10 July 2009

This is a beautiful poem! Did u come up with it urself tho? Either way, tho, its beautiful!

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Tracey Wynn 21 June 2009

It is a well written poem on Africa. It isfferent than what I usually read. Keep writing and i give you a 10.

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Really good.Please send your poem to poetryforchange.com to be considered for selection in the anthology.A ten from me. The instructions are on my poem AFRICA'S SOUL.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

Wonderful poem on Africa. 10+

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Solomon Bright Dankwa

Solomon Bright Dankwa

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