Saturday, May 31, 2008

Afresh Comments

Rating: 4.0

Devotion to you
Is all I know
Don’t give me
Your smiles
...
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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O Anna Niemus 08 June 2008

Would not Allah say that such thoughts are better left sacred and private

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Sanjay Pandian 01 June 2008

Quite naugthy stuff, Sulaiman. I am lovin' it.A 10 for you. Take care.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 01 June 2008

When love stays afresh with flesh...after the taste gone the love and never be refreshed...unless the love is bless and destined through eternity.

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Alison Cassidy 31 May 2008

Passion with balls. A succinctly penned passionate account of the meat and gravy of a relationship. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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