Tuesday, March 7, 2006

Afraid To Lose Comments

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She's taken it the last time
Letting all their words get right to her
She's in the kitchen grabbing a knife
While all of her emotions start to stir
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Sugar Bear
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Arielle Perkins 07 March 2006

This poem is so deep, but I can relate to every word. Please, suicide is not the solution. All those stirred up emotions is part of being a teen. Believe me Im went through that stage and am still triying to survive it. You have done the right thing, expressing yourself in poetry.Please dont stop writing poems.

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