Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Afraid? Comments

Rating: 4.0

Air journey commences with bonhomie
Chatting, talking, surfing, eating
Check-in brings smiles
Boarding cards, glee
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COMMENTS
Bernard Snyder 08 September 2014

Enjoyed this intriguing 'piece'. Thanks for sharing!

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Marvin Brato 02 October 2013

Good narration, an interesting story poem!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013

good imagery, you capture it very detail good poem

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

a nice description on a perfect flight to landing, An enjoyable read.

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Valsa George 06 August 2013

The excitement and anxiety of an air travel! No matter how often one travels, take off and landing are a bit scary! Enjoyed this flight from the preliminary formalities of boarding a plane to the final halting! !

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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