Sunday, January 27, 2008

Afraid Comments

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Sometimes we are afraid to face the mistakes we made in life
We are afraid to make a difference between good and bad

We are not equal
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Serenity Fay
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Yaseen Anwer 10 October 2008

powerful stroke by pen fine construction keep going........

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Merlin M 06 August 2008

Well done. I feel like I hide my poetry from the world. I know we tell truth often times but not enough to astound others how much we really see. It is amaizing how after reading your piece i feel, like i ought to let loose all those inhibitions an' let the world shudder under their feet for what we shall be speak.

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Great poem in that it really reflects a certain reality. Most of us go through life hiding secrets of one sort or another.

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