Afraid Comments

Hi Alyssa, I tend to read this poem, connecting it with your poem, Abused, which I have just read. The lack of confidence in a child to face the world. Her fear of losing everything she loves, treasures and hopes to to retain for life- these emotions have been captured so truthfully in the poem that the poet (though a little girl) is able to speak directly to the hearts of the readers. Fantastic poem. Do continue to write and share.10+

Written in all honestly of whats the true human behaviour and its unaccounted fears.... (Y)