Thursday, June 25, 2015

'Afraid' Comments

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'Afraid'

I believe but not in me
I can be strong for whom it would be
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Gelmar Villariasa
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Jazib Kamalvi 25 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Gelmar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 04 July 2015

A sincere inward reflection and soul searching will for sure reveal the source of ones fears. I believe that fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, thanks why on facing fear squarely, often one finds it inconsequential. I like the depth and insight of the poem. In conclusion, one must keep faith because faith keeps those that keep the faith. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 July 2015

Everyone is afraid of one thing of the other. I am too. Of many things. Poems like this gives me some sort of support. Like it. thank you

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Allotey Abossey 26 June 2015

Brilliantly written, excellent diction, great work, inspirational. God bless you

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

thank you ^_^ it is my first time I'm kinda scared to post this but thanks ^_^ I'm motivated now to post my aall work..

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2015

Fear can be overcome. It is usually a product of lack of information. I liked the first person writing of this piece, Gelmar

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

yeah! you're right I hate to study that is why ^_^ but thanks..

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 26 June 2015

Fear is an adversary that must be conquered, nice one. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'Isthmus Of Pain And Joy'

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

thank you.. ^_^

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