Monday, May 27, 2019

Aflame Comments

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Igniting an intense heat
He melts through her firewall

Cautiously his flames scorch
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Simone Harriman
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Bri Edwards 14 February 2023

This is 'too hot for me'. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2022

But, no matter, whether or not I understand some PH poems, if the authors of them attract me with their seeming-sincerity and friendliness, LIKE YOU DO, I like the poet. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2022

Simone, no wonder I 'had trouble with this one'! ! ! All previous commenters mention 'metaphor'; I don't even spell the word correctly with my first try. (cont.)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 September 2019

A lovely metaphoric write, dear Ma’am Simone...10+++

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Michael Walker 25 July 2019

A hot extended metaphor for love. Brilliantly executed.

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Jane Campion 27 May 2019

Great use of metaphor.

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