Monday, February 27, 2012

Afghanistan Comments

Rating: 2.9

A country so far away
And for this we will pay
They don't want a democracy
They'd rather have a theocracy
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J.B. LeBuert
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 February 2012

My comment disappeared again. Anyway, I think the poem is commendable in its honesty and boldness to convey the message we all feel but fail to express. Write on!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 February 2012

I like your poem because it is true and bold. The lines convey the message all of us feel in our hearts yet we find a famine in words to express them. I commend Poemhunter too in not being cowered into censorship regarding poems like these. Bravo! I salute you as a fellow poet! Write on!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 February 2012

Very good political poem, but could you please check the UN list of debtors and find out which country is in the topmost position? As you have written here, something is wrong with big guns..

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