Friday, May 8, 2009

Afghan Wounded Comments

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Afghan wounded
Seeking treatment
you medicate...
But you must know
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Afzal Shauq
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Gita Ashok 30 July 2010

Last line is poignant. But people change with the changing times. So let's hope it's in the best interest of everbody. Nice write.

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a great poem..and of great meaning....really peace should be the first priority of all..! ! !

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 14 April 2010

very potent...short and poignant..

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Angela Michel 05 August 2009

Very well put indeed. There will be no peace until we learn to live in peace.

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Lalitha iyer 30 June 2009

When the seed was sown you were asleep down When the thorns weeded you were dancing crowned When the sprouted Cactus its spikes bleeding spared not the passer-by what use wasting cry past tense cannot be future tense Histories could not be Geographied......................

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Zeinab Sherif 20 June 2009

yes, nature never changes&this is a problem, i'm confused,2 put10+++++++++++++++ or10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++.never mind, they r the same

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 May 2009

Never a truer word written...pain as theirs seen but never felt. Impossible to explain -

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