Affliction Comments

Really a poignant bit of a versebcrafted in a well twisted poetic diction. A beautiful creation...

Multiple attacks and strokes he accumulates there. A factual vibrant page from the Mundane life book 10+

A poignant piece of poetry dear madam! It gives me a different taste each time I visit this wonderful work of yours! Pray for your good health, happiness and peace!

Cont... The manner of treatment of the children for their father as vividly portrayed in this marvelous write is beyond comprehension and repugnant to the values that have been inculcated in us since time immemorial. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. A must read poem.

A powerful, perceptive and incisive poem. A heart rending write that captures the strained relationship among children and.parents. Love and respect must be given to parents especially in their old age. Children must remember how parents gave their life in rearing them.

Well conceived and nicely written in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, madam.

Affliction portrayed in a wonderful manner. modern problems. lack of humility. playing Ego, family. father, mother. sons and daughters and in -Laws.. love your poem. these are real problems in life. spirituality is the answer....... relationship with God and the Holy Scriptures is the answer.. thank u dear poetess. Indira. tony

Bound to the familial chores Honest fathers await laudable lores Distressed fathers gifted with sores.. Still mean the men of bad scores? madam very worth reading poem here with 10

A great poem! I derive a lot of pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always blessed dear madam!

A creative, candid and compelling composition!

A stark reality presented in realistic terms! Aged parents being ill treated by sons and daughters in law is not a rare occurrence these days! You have beautifully unveiled the strained family relationships. Great write! A 10

Bound to the familial chores Honest fathers await laudable lores......I get pleasure revisiting this poem! Thanks dear madam for sharing! Stay always blessed!

Bound to the familial chores Honest fathers await laudable lores Distressed fathers gifted with sores.. Still mean the men of bad scores? .....touching expression! A great poem! Thanks for sharing dear madam! Pray God stay always blessed with happy poetry writing........Dillip

A heart-wrenching ode to old age and parenthood. Excellent write! Worthy of a wider audience!

The audio titilated me still your poem is awesome.read my ownnerve of poetry

A dark side of family relations. The pain and anguish of old age...very few lucky one escape it. Thank you for sharing.

Heart touching poem on a very realistic social issue. The pain of a neglected father especially in the old age has been nicely depicted in your write.. Appreciated..10

I am also an old grandfather, I understand pains of the old parents. The poem is touching.

family. , children, old parents, avarice, greed. desire to possess. arrogance...............all parents be aware.......... be safe and think when you write off your property......... thank you dear poetess. tony

'pettha manam pitthu..pillai manam kallu' very well said mam...i did see it happen to my dad please read my poems and give your encoraging comments 'a baby's chat' 'a beautiful dawn' 'a rise and fall of humanity' 'as fighter and fought - lord krishna'