Thursday, July 31, 2008

Affliction Comments

Rating: 5.0

You abuse yourself
In your little world
Only thoughts of you
Whirl and twirl
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Lunar Aires
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Keith Foley 08 August 2008

Filled with emotiion, makes you stop and think. Enjoyed it and thanks for the editorial at the end, reading those helps put the poem in perspective.

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Shy Powder 31 July 2008

I enjoyed this poem of yours, it was very clear, and full of thought.

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