Wednesday, February 21, 2007

Affliction Comments

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I am afflicted with those memories,
sometimes, I'm glad that I have them,
sometimes, I feel cursed that they are me,
sometimes , I'm not sure how I feel,
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Barry Van Allen
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Indira Renganathan 14 September 2008

Too much a shining affliction.I agree with Marvin Brato..life is like a wheel...nice write..kindly read my poem 'affliction' if time prmits.Thank you

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Pia Andersson 15 July 2007

You talk about yourself, your life and your dreams in a very interesting way Its like I am sitting next to you listening. Your writing is clear as crystal and just as shining! Thank you for you wonderful poem

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Marvin Brato 04 July 2007

Life is like a wheel, it keeps moving and turning! Time and days pass by and keep changing, til one day we reach the end alone. Good thing we are afflicted with different lifestyles, feelings and thoughts; these what make life meaningful. Great write Barry. Thank for sharing.

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Alfredo Jacques 28 April 2007

wow wonderfully written, thank you for sharing.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 21 February 2007

Hey Barry... sometimes love is bad, sometimes good, and then again sometimes it's bad... fine write

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Dee Daffodil 21 February 2007

Is loving life a bad thing? ? ? Hugs, Dee

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Danny Reynolds 21 February 2007

I have heard, that when poets make love on a nylon carpet, they often end up with affliction burns. We're cursed, Barry, but that's what makes us special. Danny

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