Wednesday, August 4, 2021

Afflicted Thought... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sad I was thinking of goodbye,
the breeze passed caressing me,
tears wrapped in sobs
dampened in grief
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John F. Bisner Ureña.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

but dear Luis, you forgot to describe your responses about this brilliant poem. Do not pay attention to what is not, but respond to what here IS.Thank you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

A poem so touching, and full of melancholy, I am mesmerized, this lovely sad poem deserves 5 Stars full on Top! Thank you so much for sharing this scintillating poem

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Luis A. Estable 04 August 2021

At times, I see poems not getting the reading they deserves, and those not deserving so much getting a number or reads. This is such an example. Good verses. I hope it gets lots of reads.

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