Saturday, December 15, 2007

Affirmation Comments

Rating: 2.0

A stranger ventured
across the universal chasm
setting lips and tongue
to calculated motion.
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Robert Charles Howard
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Chitra - 29 November 2008

splendid lines flowing out from the reservoir of warmth thank you for sharing Sir

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

An interesting poem. Love it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 July 2008

'Thank you dear'......I enjoied it.

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Bianca J. Walker 23 June 2008

This one left me a little perplexed. I wasn't sure were you were going with it.

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Sandra Fowler 27 January 2008

Warmth is a rare gift, one that keeps on giving. Captivating imagery. As always, Sandra

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Michael Shepherd 29 December 2007

I love its stylised warmth!

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Scarlett Treat 26 December 2007

Wonderful image here, of the stranger vaulting the chasm (of not knowing you) , and, setting everything in motion, provoking a response from you. Well orchestrated poem!

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Alison Cassidy 24 December 2007

This is quite superb Robert - an thoroughly charming, elegant, cleverly conceived and perfectly executed poem. love, Allie xxxx

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'My reservoir of social response'. I am SO going to steal that line (probably at the next Christmas party) . Superbly carved piece. t x

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Robert Charles Howard

Robert Charles Howard

Wyandotte MI
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