A stranger ventured
across the universal chasm
setting lips and tongue
to calculated motion.
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This one left me a little perplexed. I wasn't sure were you were going with it.
Warmth is a rare gift, one that keeps on giving. Captivating imagery. As always, Sandra
Wonderful image here, of the stranger vaulting the chasm (of not knowing you) , and, setting everything in motion, provoking a response from you. Well orchestrated poem!
This is quite superb Robert - an thoroughly charming, elegant, cleverly conceived and perfectly executed poem. love, Allie xxxx
'My reservoir of social response'. I am SO going to steal that line (probably at the next Christmas party) . Superbly carved piece. t x
splendid lines flowing out from the reservoir of warmth thank you for sharing Sir