[affinity In Disarray] Comments

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, but as you know, I have'nt been here lately. This write of your Amanda is beautiful, so full of emotions and love. Your pen translates your thoughts well to paper. You have a true winner here. This new write of yours is awesome. And I do mean, 'AWESOME'. This is one of those poem's that you read, and wished that you had wrote it instead. You have done a superb job here my friend Amanda. 'Keep on inking the Pages' ~~~Poison~~~

This is a piece that speaks very well to anyone who reads it; you should use this 4 one that you feel such 4 aside from having it here....It does not have to be anytime soon. Just hold it to BEING USED for a 'love letter.'

You have an out of the ordinary way of expressing a most common thought. I like that in a writer.

Very sweet and intoxicating, a good size but I wouldn't have argued if the poem went on for another verse or two, it was a good subject to write on and would love to see more poems on this but from different angles, you know to mix things up.