Monday, September 18, 2006

Affinity And Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

Getting up at dawn
Before the birds
And sunbeams yawn
I walk the path
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shimon weinroth
COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 18 September 2006

A wonderful welcome to the morning! This poem shines with its own light, Shimon. Regards, Sandra

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Steve Hagget 18 September 2006

well controlled imagery and really good use of language, Steve

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

Excellent poem, Shimon! What a wonderful use of sensory language!

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