Monday, May 21, 2018

Affections Comments

Rating: 5.0

Weary warriors wobbled home
Wearing kilts, drag pitchforks
Villages pillaged into ashes
Bones, altars desecrated
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Doris Cornago
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Kostas Lagos 22 May 2018

Superb poem! S-u-p-e-r-b!

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deborrahcornago 22 May 2018

Hi Kostas, I was actually thinking of you when I wrote this, and the disparity of ancient beliefs and current godless mindsets. Is it a degenerative generation?

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Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

A nice write Doris.+++10

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deborrahcornago 22 May 2018

Hi Robert. Thank you, I am really glad you liked the poem despite that background intro, :)

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