Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Affection I Versify Comments

Rating: 5.0

Affection spirited like the ocean
Vast I versify for my emotion
To picture in her eyes, how devotion
I have for her heart, moves as the lotion
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Beautiful interesting composition shared my friend...Thanks! ! ! 10

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wael karameh 18 August 2009

clear, interesting and nice.......... wael.

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Ravi Sathasivam 17 August 2009

Beautiful. Well penned Enjoyed

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rago rago 15 August 2009

nice and beautiful presentation.............

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Howard Johnson 12 August 2009

Enjoyed the poetic rhyming, thank you for sharing Obinna

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Luwi Habte 11 August 2009

cool as usual nice poem Luwi

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Sandra Martyres 04 August 2009

Nice piece with perfect rhyming...10

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 August 2009

Nice poem.......Well expressed......cheers with 10+++

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