Sunday, March 16, 2008

Affection Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come! Give me your thoughts that have wandered far and long
in the realm of green meadows and the daisies' song
of love-me, love-me-not petals that shed their tears
beneath the hope of your touch and the joy of years.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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C F 09 February 2019

You are a superb lyricist, the images you project are very vivid, I like your choice of simple words that when combined cleverly transform into beautiful verse - line by line. Will visit your poems again later.

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Rayniece Clayborne 22 April 2008

spoken like a real poet from the soul

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 March 2008

the touch of joy when to revel to rave up by the passion reasons to desire as the scarlet red terribly tweakes the love yet it reasonsas love is alight all the amazing splendors pierce the blood to veil the tears............................written when eloquent reasons luscious,10/10, thanks fo sharing

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Let us catch the splendor of the indigo breeze I stand transported into that reverie Thnx-hugs-rehan

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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