Afer She Smiled, A Kiss She Blew Me Comments

Very well written isunge!

better to love and lose than never been...it's an experience that renders maturity to self...

I am no critic of poetry; If i relate then i like and in this case i relate! i can almost feel that sadness!

SO many emotions! ! ! ! really good and breathtaking... the only thing here... would be maybe to change the title to 'after she smiled, she blew me a kiss'.. just i think it sounds and looks better... but the actual content of this poem is very nice!

nice verse here..a nice piece

well... this is quite extraordinary...it made me think and read again and again..