Monday, September 18, 2017

Aesthetic. Comments

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A world we'd like to share,

it's a perfect place
where we feel, touch and smell grace
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Marcondes Pereira
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Practicing Poetess 18 September 2017

Simply lovely, Marcondes! I like your rhyme scheme- - A, B, B, B, A. I much prefer words to mathematics! :)

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Marcondes P 19 September 2017

Hi, dear Poetess. I'm glad to know that you consider my poem lovely. I tried to create something more soft. And I am equally glad to see that you noticed, and liked my rhyme scheme. :)

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