Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Aesop’s Empty Clip Comments

Rating: 5.0

He left the house this morning early and bright as the Glock stuck 9mm
Cheerfully he shot and killed eight people and wounding two as his aim
Was slightly off
Reloading as the cops arrived
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Ted Sheridan
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So true especially when one loses their innocence to commit premeditated murder.

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 29 November 2007

How tragically true to life. Well written.

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Good Poem Ted.. brilliantly exposes a corrupt system.

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Thad Wilk 29 November 2007

A good one Ted! I agree! ! Thad

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Lee Degnan 28 November 2007

Goes to show, there IS no justice in this world... Powerful.

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