Aerrenfyrre (Mars & Mercury) Comments

.... And you! ...my funeral pyre; excellent sonya! Merging of fire into fire, a flame into flame for descending higher and higher!

so imaginative! so sensual and witty at the same time. I know you must have had fun writing it.

Adore this poem, Sonya, read it out loud as you adviced and the effect is very original :) A treasure. Thank you and best wishes. A.

Note: In order to fully enjoy this poem, you have to read it out loud. But before doing so, imagine yourself as Audrey Hepburn, then recite it, following the punctuation marks, in her breathy love-struck voice. Good luck!