Thursday, May 27, 2010

Aerodynamic Lips Comments

Rating: 5.0

Press the pause key and hold it right there,
Freeze frame the love that is in the air,
Can you see the curvature of her face,
Of which my eyes must caress in trace,
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Dale Mullock
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Lisa Struthers 02 August 2012

Your words make my heart stir...so lovely! ~Lisa

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 August 2010

I wish no air pockets come through this airborne love. Truely modern cupid and all modern love weapons. Wonderful poem, Dale. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Brandi Guthrie 07 June 2010

Whoa! I swoon, I love the word ussage and how you set the mood. So romantic.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 June 2010

what a kiss! Get your breath back.

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