Aeriforms Comments

PoetrySoup - 'Great use of adjectives to enhance your imagery! I love your use of gems and how picturesque your word weaving is: flows so well and theres so many lines that stood out for me like " where malachite petals marry emerald blades" whoa! " confetti of bees" very creative! '

I put this on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'outstanding, Clive. As I was reading your poem for some reason I thought of bees. Anyway, I loved your images and your alliteration. Your poems structure had a steady cadence that I appreciated.'