Friday, September 6, 2013

Ae Hawa Tu Daakiya Ban Jaana........ Comments

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Ae hawa aaj tu daakiya ban jaana,,
mere pyare bhai takbehna ka sandesaa pahuchaana...
pyaar bharaa ek paigaam usko de aana...
kuchh bhi krke uske hothon pr muskaan sajaana...
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shraddha shraddha the poetess
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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2014

The festival I like much is Rakhsha Bandhan. I was amused to read this poem. Though I am a muslim but we used to celebrate it in India.

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Shaik Mehboob 15 September 2013

superb poem shraddha ji, , , very touchy too.

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Utsav Patel 07 September 2013

Beautiful indeed... Well written... Keep it up

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

Beautiful poem for brother on Rakhi day...It is really fantastic. I am sure you brother would have loved to read it. Loved it Shraddha.

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Shraddha The Poetess 07 September 2013

thnx ramesh sir and thnx ankur bhaiyaaa and shubham bhaiyaaaaaaa

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Ramesh Rai 06 September 2013

on love of brother n sister i hv posted three poem viz didi n two r on rakhi plz read. your one is xlent like honey dripping.

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Shraddha The Poetess 06 September 2013

i agree bhaiya.......relationship of brother sisite is one of the most precious relation........... thnx a lot for ur commment

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