Tuesday, September 23, 2008

....Advise Of Those In Power..To Those Who Have No Choice. Comments

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come
lets kiss and rejoice
you..
in my ingenuity,
...
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wardha jawdat
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Mamta Agarwal 06 October 2008

a sensitive poem from a compassionate heart. lets play blind folded and wear rear plugs- very moving indeed. silent sufferef- the common man. Mamta

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Ershad Mazumder 29 September 2008

It is really a poem dear wardha. I like your style.

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come lets play blindfolded you.. will still envision joy and me apathetic, oblivious to the tears turning red blood as wine

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Reshma Ramesh 23 September 2008

good work wardha iam working on one too one the same topic...

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come lets wear deaf plugs you.. can then sing along with my loud booming rythym..all the while as the moans of tattered, torn, children.. ................die. a hearfelt tribute ... 'what have I done to deserve this' why crimson and black only colour for the suppleness of my youth... 'why interjection of deafening death to balance faintest of my smiles....

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