Sunday, December 6, 2020

Advice To The Fire In My Ire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Counterproductive to make my world cold
No matter how much I feel bold
Trashing established order
Crushing my peace to sow seeds of disorder
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John Sensele
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Martin Greyford 06 December 2020

Lovely rhyming of words.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

Great rhymes great flow as usual. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 December 2020

A well inked poem....... Truly impressive......5 stars*****

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John Sensele

John Sensele

Ndola, Zambia
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