Thursday, April 17, 2014

Advice To My Son Comments

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Teen years rushed your age
Now at junction of twenty-eight
Long years before you, to tread
You’ve to captain your ship through
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Paul Sebastian
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Nisha Charles 08 February 2016

Paul..you captivated and poured out in poetry, a strong bond between father and son...Speechless! God Bless!

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Charity Nduhiu 09 September 2015

Happiness is like a butterfly you chase it, higher it will fly. But, stand among the flowers It will come to rest on your shoulder. I have fallen in love with poem. Paul you are such a daddy. I like the way you have advised your son. I wish every father is reading this advice and follow suit. Thank you Paul

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Valsa George 18 April 2014

What solid advice by a loving Dad to a son to fare in life..... Nothing has been left out... You have touched upon his physical, spiritual and emotional well being, stressing on the need to develop a tri polar relationship with oneself, God and fellow men..... The concluding stanza is just wonderful! Happiness is like a butterfly You chase it, higher it will fly To elude you Starkly true But, stand among the flowers It will come to rest on your shoulder.

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