Saturday, February 2, 2008

Advice Of Elders (For What It’s Worth) Comments

Rating: 3.7

I remember, yes remember
Though distant the sounds of youth
Older people voicing warnings
Their ancient versions of the truth
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Mary Havran
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Theresa Moore 16 February 2008

As time goes by we gain a different perspective. Then we begin to understand. You deliver quite a punch at the end of your poem. Enjoyable read...thanks.

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Res John Burman 07 February 2008

Oh I like this one Mary, and your last line shows you see it clearly too. Kudos

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Mason Geher 02 February 2008

Real surprise to the ending, you had me fooled.

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