Advice, Before It's Too Late Comments

A very profound look inside of yourself. Need tofind a soothing point there without any disturbance from outside, introverted.

Beautiful imagery. Thanks for share this poem, Daniel.

lodged in my head offers soothing. It has reached me like the ancient gift of Victory. You have gone far enough. It's time to rest.

away from anger, withdraw into quietude, a kind of sleep for your troubled senses. To be right, to be righteous is to be alone when you most need companionship

It began on the inspiring note and ended with the confusion in the mind as to whether the journey is worthwhile to continue or to stop to take rest and think about the other course of life. Introspection is must at every stage and after every expedition. A thoughtful poem from your pen.10****

A well composed poem. Truly magnificent...5 stars+++

'withdraw into quietude, a kind of sleep for your troubled senses. To be right, to be righteous is to be alone when you most need companionship.' - Loved these lines!