Monday, October 12, 2009

Advice Comments

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The advice my parents give me,
Is to wear a jacket so they won’t see.
My fresh, silky smooth mistakes,
But sooner or later they will all intake.
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Gold Fish 12 October 2009

The mistakes of yesterday are a vivid reminder of how far you have come, so be proud that you have put cutting behind you. I commend you for your courage. A strong poem full of vivid emotions, free-flowing and dark, yet beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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